This is my rough cut and final cut of my contents page, as you can see these are extremely different.
The Images
I included 3 images into my final cut, but i used different images to show a vary of artist types and to show my magazine was mixed gender.
The Banner
I was quite happy in my rough cut about the banner at the top therefore i kept it the same, my target audience also liked the banner and i was told to keep it the same by them. My teachers liked the font of the 'contents issue 164' this is why i stuck with it.
Story Descriptions
The 'plus' on the rough copy is a different font to the final copy, this is because i got feedback to say that i was using to many font types, therefore i changed it to a font i already had on that page. The story descriptions are structured much neater and more organised on the final cut as they are all over the place and not lined up to look professional on the rough cut. I also used more stories, as my target audience said that i did not have enough, and that i also did not have enough on artists story.
Page NumbersThe page numbers on my final cut look so much more professional and link with the colour scheme and house style of my magazine. These were changed due to feedback saying that my page numbers down the left side of the page on the rough cut were boring whereas the right side of it included colour, therefore for my final cut i made sure they all used colour but a variety of colours that stuck with my colour scheme.


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