Article changes

Today I completely changed and rewrote my whole article, this is because the feedback from my target audience said that the article in my rough copy didn't include enough detail, I was told by my target audience that the double page spread was to white, plain and boring, because of this criticism I added a small intro to the article, I made the title 'ELEKTRA' bigger so that its goes across both pages. I also added a caption on the image with a quote from the artist. In the article, I added my information and detail about the singer, rather than it mostly being all questions and answers. I have also kept it so that half of the article is questions and answers but i have ensured that the answers from the artist are more detailed, to show readers more about her. The article is now longer and much more professional. The drop down capital letter which is faded behind the text, makes the page look more exciting and full without it looking to cramped.